Once upon time a gorilla was name Kong he was known to live in the beautiful place could Nigeria. people were afraid to go into the jungle because Kong . but he was one of the most deadly creches ever.
found in the history of Alnilam but he was afraid of rain,tiger,lion.and cheater but will try and protect its family from toes type of animal. but
sometimes it will not protect his family.because it would get biotin too.
much from toes animal but some time other gorilla come to help scar all of those animal from getting the baby gorilla and getting eaten from author predators so. then Kong came. to save the day and Kong was strong he could crush anything in his way but his family died when a pack of lion’s came and eat his mum and dad. Lucky Kong was not found by the crutches that eat his family.
Then Kong was all alone then he found a cave then he lived in the cave then when i got older i heard something walking into my cave then it was red tiger the only tiger i was not. scared because i met him when my family died.then red tiger ask me what happen Kong said helicopter tried to kill me and sorry for the big bang in the middle the night.
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Great story Jared, I like the punctuation but there were words that dident make scene. There were also some spelling mistakes but still it was a fabulous story.
ReplyDeleteHi Jared your story nearly made me fall on the ground but there was 2 words that was not spelled right animal and sense
ReplyDeleteHi Jared. I really like your story because it made me smile. Maybe Jared you can read your story loud out to your self because it was really good.Jared Keep up your good writing.
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