I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, August 17, 2017
Thursday, August 10, 2017
The Ridge
In the past 3 day of we have been writing about the Ridge i hope you like my story
Hi my name is Danny, I wanted to go to the Ridge for along time. I have been mountain biking for a long time. It had been my dream to come here. I was rowing my boat I could hear the rushing sound of water. I could see the hungry seal swimming around me. I got there, my dream came true when i put my foot down on the rocky land of the Ridge.
I grabbed my bike and off I went. It was as tricky as I thought but I was happy that i was here.
I went zooming off to the mountain and biked my way to the top. I had went through a mini water- fall then jumped over a big gap. I hopped off my bike and climbed a mountain. Then I went back down to get to the next mountain. I had to go zooming down to the bottom but i still made it in one piece.
I just got down there. That was a fun ride. Then my arm and legs were starting to ache but I did not stop at all. I kept going to the next mountain then i had to carry my bike again to get up the hill. I went up to the top then went down again. then I went back
down. When I got to the grass bit I did a flip on the barbwire then I got to the beach. There I got to look at the view and had a rest. I forgot to tell you Goodbye.
Friday, August 4, 2017
writing about Kong.
This term we were writing a animal story my one is about Kong we started to writing for four days to finish this story, if you write your own story make sure its make scens and got a juicy words i hope you enjoy.
Once upon time a gorilla was name Kong he was known to live in the beautiful place could Nigeria. people were afraid to go into the jungle because Kong . but he was one of the most deadly creches ever.
Once upon time a gorilla was name Kong he was known to live in the beautiful place could Nigeria. people were afraid to go into the jungle because Kong . but he was one of the most deadly creches ever.
found in the history of Alnilam but he was afraid of rain,tiger,lion.and cheater but will try and protect its family from toes type of animal. but
sometimes it will not protect his family.because it would get biotin too.
much from toes animal but some time other gorilla come to help scar all of those animal from getting the baby gorilla and getting eaten from author predators so. then Kong came. to save the day and Kong was strong he could crush anything in his way but his family died when a pack of lion’s came and eat his mum and dad. Lucky Kong was not found by the crutches that eat his family.
Then Kong was all alone then he found a cave then he lived in the cave then when i got older i heard something walking into my cave then it was red tiger the only tiger i was not. scared because i met him when my family died.then red tiger ask me what happen Kong said helicopter tried to kill me and sorry for the big bang in the middle the night.
The End
Tuesday, August 1, 2017
telling time
W.A.L.T. Telling time
hello i have made a telling a time video because i did not know my time last year hope you enjoy but now i do her is a short clip
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