What I have learnt In the past.

Before the end of the year we do writing to see what we have improve on and what we learnt. My goal was to put punctuation , capital letters , and capital I when they are alone in a senates. I hope you enjoy and please tell me what I have miss any thing  and leave a helpful comment.       


Name: Jared                                               Date: 5/4/2018

Planning space

Halloween

Last week Sam Corbyn And I went trick or treating. Corbyn dress up as a vampire next
Sam dress up as a vampire ninja and I dress up as a dead cowboy. We went trick or
treating at 5.00 clock.  

Off we went trick or treating we went to this spooky home. And I said to Sam did you know
this house was going to be spooky? Sam reply yes this house all ways dose halloween
they love giving kids lollies. So we  went up the driveway and knock on their door.
When the door open we said trick or treat. We got heaps of lollies.

Then we went roaming around the block trick or treating by the time it was 6.00 clock my
school bag was half full of lollies.By 7.00 clock I had to much lollies. So then I found little
kids with their parents and gave them lollies. Then I went home and filled the lollies / toffee
jar up with the leftover lollies that I had.

 I hope you enjoy and please tell me what I have miss any thing  and leave a helpful comment.