Thursday, August 16, 2018
Cross country
Yesterday the whole school went to the Kyle Park to do cross country. There were different year group we all cross the road and sat in front of the cone that has the year levels the year six's got up and went to the starting line the boy z were going to go first but we had to wait for a student to so the girls went first race stater said on your mark get set BANG the to pecs of wood clap together the girls of to the first part of the race the year six boy z went I was getting nerves as I went up I look up to the sky then got my a game on I got ready I heard on your mark get set go I shot off to the first part of the race I got around the first part next I got the hill then ran to BMX track I was coming first I got to the BMX track I went around then went up the last hill there was the finish line I cross it I cam 1st. hope you enjoy my story pleases put a helpful comment.
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Hi Jared it is Zavier from Wigram Primary I like the way you told us what happened part by part, next time you could write whole like that instead of hole, do you know that our school did our cross country at school.
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