Hello my name is Jared. Today my group are going to share a slide about cyclones including the cyclone that hit Tonga, Samoa and Fiji. I hope you like the slide and pictures. Enjoy.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, May 21, 2018
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Sup Jared Its Patrick I really like you diorama. Advise for next time make the words on the slide A bit bigger because I found It a bit hard to see the words. except from the words everything else was great.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jared,
ReplyDeleteThis is Shadrach from your school. I really like your cyclone Gita I appreciate the colours of your background. I also love the picture. And I really really like your diorama that you made.
Maybe next time Put picture of tornado hurricane and cyclone in each slide for cool background and more details.
Keep up the good work :)
Nice
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