I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, November 26, 2018
story time
One hot sunny day it was 40 degrees, It was to hot. The bird's where flying delivering baby’s, puppies and cats I had to work with the rain cloud.
He was trying his best to be good but he could not do it he tried to make a cat but it was not what i thought it was going to be it was a baby crocodile i thought it was cute but it was not. It try to swallow me i could see it guats the dark dark cloud quilly grabe. It Then i could finally breathe he put it in the sack then i went to.
deliver it to a bad family. Then i came feathers started to fall off then the cloud brush me off then i got scared it was a rame he made it alive i hit me in the chest it wondid me i could not breath.
Off i went to go deliver the rame to a another family i came back and my tummy was hurting i look at the other cloud i flew to go get arma the mad cloud made mad thunder was happening then he cried he thought that i was working with an outer cloud.
I came back he was happy i undone the bag i put on a helmet and a suit bring it on i said then he made a electric eal ahhhhh that heart. Ahhh that heart again. The end
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