Half of my fab writing

Kia ora, for the past week I have written some writing. My writing goal was to write my orientation a when, why, who and where. Down below is my writing.

The first week normal holiday at my home my aunty won 50 inch v from us the color was Matt black we drove it up to nelson it took 5 to 6 hours to get when we got there we set the Tv. and have a look at the grafect so then  we watch the blue planet the pitcher was was like it was like i in thetv it that good then

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